B9 B...... [After graduates] from law school, he starts to be a consultant and lawyer in the Corleone family. [After graduates]改成[After graduating] There is a scene that makes me impressed [is] when Michael becomes the head of the Corleone family 可以把[is]去掉 C. Vito has [orange] in his mouth and he looks like a zombie[ so ]his grandson is scared. [orange]前面要加定冠詞[an或者the],[so]前面要加逗號,改成[,so] D In addition, some scenes [are there] strictly for their aesthetic. [are there]改成[there are] G I would absolutely recommend this movie to[ others]. [others]前面可以加the,變成[the others],也可以不加